Jumat, 03 September 2010

A Big Adventure at Disney Island


Jack and Ann were best friends. They always did something together. They had same characteristics, they liked to play although their mother did not know it, and they did not like vegetables.

A week ago, they had a very big adventure. In the evening, they went to a lake and they rent a boat. It almost dark, but they still played there. Suddenly, they saw a fog, jack was curious, he went to the fog. When they entered the fog, it seemed dark, ”OH NO! Jack, where are you?” said Ann. “I’m still here Ann! Stay calm” said jack. Jack fast the boat and they went out from the fog. But, they arrived at an island. Ann suddenly cried. “oh my God! Where are us? mommy, mommy I want to meet my mommy” Ann cried. “Ann, I am afraid too. But, if you cry, it is not solve the problem. Stop crying Ann. I’ll always beside you” said Jack. Ann stopped cry. They walked around the island, but they were very tired and they made a bed from grasses.

In the morning, Ann and Jack woke up. They felt hungry, then they walked around to look for food. They entered a forest, but they did not find any food. They keep walked, when they went out from the forest, they found an amazing city. It was colorful. They run cheerfully, they find a lot of amazing place, a small house like the 7 dwarfs house, a palace, a candy hose, and many more. They looked for a restaurant. When they found it, they entered it and took a lot of foods. After they finished, they went to the cashier, but there were not people there. They then went from the restaurant, because they thought everything were free there. They went to the playground then, they played happily and cheerfully. In the afternoon, Ann said “ I am hungry jack” . “let’s go to the trees! There were a lot of fruits there” said jack. They went to the trees. But they were surprised, the fruits were not ordinary fruits! They were candies, chocolates, breads, biscuits, and another sweet foods, when they reached he “fruits”, the trees shorter. They ate all kinds of foods there. They then slept under the tree. Suddenly jack said “Ann, don’t you realize that there are not any people here?” Ann sat down and said ”oh I do not realize it Jack, but you are right. Where do people here?” “do you want to looked for them Ann?” “okay, let’s find them” . they walked slowly and saw carefully. Suddenly, jack heard a cried from a house. Ann and he went to the cried. The cried was from a house in the corner of street. They looked from the window. They were surprised! They saw mickey and minnie mouse, Donald and daisy duck, goofy, Pluto, Cinderella, snow white and the 7 dwarfs and a lot of Disney characters there. They knocked the door and mickey opened the door. “hello, I am jack, and this is my best friend, Ann. I heard a cried from here. What’s up?” Jack introduced themselves .”come on. I’ll tell it for you” said mickey. After they sat, mickey said “there were broccoli aliens came here. They wanted our city”. “yes, we don’t want it, but the aliens will destroy our city if we don’t give it to them” Donald said sadly. “they give us time until 00.00 this day. I am so afraid. Do you mind to help us please? Said daisy. Ann and jack did not say anything, they hated vegetables. They felt sad also, because their favorite characters sad and the amazing city will be destroyed. Suddenly, Ann stood up, she said “I have a good idea! Please ask all people come here and brought sauce, knife, and fork! We can fight them! Because they are vegetables! We can eat them together!” “but I hate vegetables, and you are too Ann!” said jack. “but our friends need our help! Please help them jack!” jack and another Disney characters accepted it. They asked all people came there and they told the idea and made a plan.

On 00.00, the aliens came. “hey you all! give your city now! Or we will destroy your city! Said the chief. “NO! we will not give this city for you! Fight us if you brave!” Jack said bravely. The broccoli aliens were angry! They asked them went out from the house and fight! Jack called his army, and they had ready with forks, knives and sauce. They were ready to eat the aliens. The aliens were surprised! And the aliens runs. Jack, Ann and the army run after them. They caught the broccoli and eat them with knives and forks. Jack and Ann run and caught the alien’s chief and they ate it together. The aliens were lose! The Disney characters had their city again! The Disney characters thanked to Jack an Ann. “thank you for your help. We will not forget you Jack, Ann” said mickey. “No problem, we will not forget you and this city too” said jack and ann. “take these with you” said Minnie and she gave two beautiful boxes to Jack and Ann. They then thanked to the Disney characters too and wanted to go home. Goofy asked them to entered a room in the house. “entered this room and you will arrived fast”. “thank you so much. Good bye” said Jack and Ann. The Disney characters waved their hands. The door were closed and they suddenly in the lake at their city with their boat. It was in the evening. They run to their house and told their adventure to their mother. They promised to their mother that they will not play so long and they will eat vegetables before the vegetables fought them.

-The End-